Hi, I'm Emily Shanks. I'm 12 years old and this is my second year homeschooling. I love it! This is the first time I've ever written a blog so it won't be very good. I'm going to tell you about the best day I ever had.

So there I was on my dad's lap in the tree stand, eager to get my first deer. I heard leaves crunching, branches breaking, I thought it was a deer. But turned out to only be a squirrel. I was so DISAPPOINTED!! After a little while dad spotted a deer. As we were getting ready to shoot dad saw another deer. I spotted the 3rd deer. I felt my heart pounding in my chest. Eager to get my first deer, and thinking how happy my mom and dad would be if I got it, I was so excited that I couldn't pull the trigger . So dad shot the deer. When we got down from the tree stand and over to where the deer was we found out that it was not a doe like we had thought but a button buck. When we got back to aunt Phylis and uncle Randy's house dad said, "I was as happy today as I was when I got my first deer. I was so happy because you were with me."   

So how did I do on my first blog? I had fun making it. I think I will do another. I hope you liked it. Please leave a comment and let me know what you thought!

 


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Amy
11/01/2011 13:00

Hi Emily!

I love your first blog! You did such a great job and I absolutely love your story ;) I hope we get to hear more from you!
Love,
Amy

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Tony Reed
11/01/2011 13:08

I think you did a great job on writing it and Glad to know this was your best day ever.(For Now)

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Leslie
11/01/2011 14:41

Emily you did such a great job! Look forward to reading your next blog!

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Ashlyn and Tracy
11/01/2011 14:59

Well, Ashlyn and I think you did a SUPER job on your first blog! Sounds like you could be a writer one day!!! Very nice description and expression! :-) we love you!!!

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Julita
11/01/2011 16:05

Emily, you did a great job ! I have loved your Dad since he was a little boy, and I always knew he was going to grow up to be a wonderful man who would be a fantastic husband and Father.. Thank you for sharing your day with me.. I think you are a really good writer !

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Brenda Rupard
11/01/2011 17:36

Emily; this is a great story! I really like that you love homeschooling (wish I could have homeschooled my girls). I think you are a very good writer.

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Brenda Rupard
11/01/2011 17:41

thank you for sharing your best day

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Lacey
11/01/2011 17:46

Emily i'm so glad you made a blog you did a great blog you are very smart I love you

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Kim McKay
11/01/2011 21:45

Emily, this is absolutely a perfect blog!! Thank you for sharing that experience with us!! Love it, love it!!! See you soon!!

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Jared Davis
11/02/2011 04:50

Hey Emily,

I really enjoyed reading your blog. I'm very impressed with your writing.

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Emily
11/02/2011 07:25

Thank you all for reading my blog and for all your nice comments!

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PaPa Davis
11/02/2011 14:18

Em-a-knee you did great writing about your hunt with your dad.You are making me want to go deer hunting. I want to read more stories like that, so get your pencil sharp and write some more great stories. Love you PaPa

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Dana Hilliard
11/03/2011 18:01

Emily, I am very proud of you. Your blog was AWESOME. Way to go girl. Keep up the good work. (((HUGS)))

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Nana
11/05/2011 18:05

EMILY You did a great job! I am so proud of you. I can't wait for another one, you expressed yourself very well.I love you Nana

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Becky Honey
11/08/2011 16:41

I liked your best day ever. You sound like my girls they enjoy hunting with their dad too. Looking forward to meeting you at the homeschool meetings and keep enjoying nature.

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